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My Worst Nightmare

I love my family. I love my friends. But why did this happen? Is god punishing me? I

don’t think I did anything wrong. Why Becky? Why not my dumb annoying brother

James? Becky was the closest person in the world to me. We told each other

EVERYTHIING. Even after being at school together for 6 and a half hours we called

each other every night and talked for about an hour. I loved Becky like a twin sister.

“Becky Stevens was a lovely girl. She did her work, she obeyed her parents, she got

along with her teachers, and she was loyal to her friends.” Father Rick stated. Becky’s

mum stood up and sprinkled holy water over the coffin. She then went and read a

lovely speech, she must have lots of guts to do that. Becky’s parents asked me if I

wanted to say anything, but I said no, I don’t think I would be strong enough to say

anything. I feel so sorry for Mrs Stevens. Becky was their only child, she was their

little angel that didn’t do anything wrong. Well that’s how they saw her, the Becky I

knew was pretty wild around her friends. In the past year she got about 5 detentions,

forging her parents signature in her planner every time. As far as her parents thought,

she was a saint.

After the funeral we all went to the cemetery, Becky’s grave is next to her aunties.

“Coocky Cathy” as we called her died about 2 years ago from cancer. She was really

nice, every summer she would let us come over and swim in her gigantic pool.

There were a few people from our class at the cemetery. Amie, Maddy, Harrison,

Jordan and Chantell. Life is going to be hard without Becky, I think as I lay red roses on her coffin. I’ll miss her so much, she was the bestest friend anyone could ever have.

Today is the first day back at school without Becky. The Police are here to interview

some people. When it’s my turn we go into Miss Reelmen’s classroom. The Police are

just asking me about if I knew where Becky was going last Friday evening before she

was hit. “Who was driving the car that hit her?” I ask the sergeant.

“I don’t think you’ll want to know, Becky.” He says softly. It was a hit-and-run so

they have obviously caught the murderer. “But I do want to know, they ruined a small

part of my life.” I say trying not to cry. Too late, the water works have started. I

haven’t cried since when I just found out that Becky was gone. “The person has

confessed. They will be put away for 10 years.” He says looking around.

I look outside as I wipe away the tears, there is a crowd gathering around a police car.

I stand up and walk over to the window. Mrs Loine is in cuffs and being pushed into

the police car. “That monster!” I yell, “I bet the old bat did it on purpose!” The officer

walks over to me. “She’s being punished for what she did,” he says “That’s all that matters.”

“I guess.” I whisper. I miss Becky so much.

Mind Map- Art

As a part of our homework this week we have to make a mind map based on something we have done during one of our subjects. So I chose Art, and in art we made posters with feet prints. Inside the feet had to be primary colours and on the parts of the feet overlapping they had to be secondary colours. Then in the parts that were spare we had to do any random patters. I will out up a photo of mine when I am finished, this is the mind map I made about it…

Note: You will have to click on it to view it so that you can read the writing! Thanks!

Marilyn Monroe

In English we have all been busy doing projects.  We had to pick a subject from one of these…

  1. World leaders
  2. Great Inventors
  3. 7 Wonders of the World
  4. Medical breakthroughs
  5. Great explorers
  6. Famous / infamous people
  7. Great scientists

Rachel and I were working together and we picked number 6, we did Marilyn Monroe.

We had to get a spare book and make a chart of what areas we would do, Rachel and I did a power point. The slides we had were these…

  • Front Page
  • Profile
  •  Family
  • Her Career
  • Some movies she was in
  • Awards she won
  • Picture Page
  • Where she lived
  • When/how she died
  • Mini Biography
  • Quiz
  • Where we got our information
  • Reflection
  • Ending Page

We had lollies for the 7 questions in our quiz.  Rachel and I printed the slide show and stuck the pages into a book. When we presented on the smart board we sat up the back with the cordless mouse while our class watched the slide show.

Everyone had to give us a rating for

Oral presentation

Voice clarity

Eye contact

Voice loud enough

Content

Clear explanation of content

Information written in own words

Personal reflection

Virtual bibliography

Entertainment value

Quiz

Audience interaction

Video

Pod casts

Visual presentation

Fonts easy to read

Good contrast between text and b/g colour

Slides not too busy

Good use of graphics

Hyperlinks work

In the end Ms Murnane gave us 39/40! We were very happy with our score:)